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    Ashiuhto is offline Senior Member
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    more frequent

    Please help me correct the following paragraph.
    Those students who are addicted to the Internet can not help thinking everything on the Net in their daily life. The more frequent and longer time they use on the Internet, they will feel uneasy in case of they have no Internet to use.

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    Re: more frequent

    We don't "think things on the net". Try to reword that part first.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: more frequent

    Students who are addicted to the Internet cannot help thinking about Internet-based activities at other times as well. The more time they spend using the Internet, the more uneasy they will feel when they have no Internet access.
    Last edited by Ashiuhto; 05-Feb-2013 at 07:49. Reason: revision

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