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Ashiuhto

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Please help me correct the following paragraph.
Those students who are addicted to the Internet can not help thinking everything on the Net in their daily life. The more frequent and longer time they use on the Internet, they will feel uneasy in case of they have no Internet to use.
 

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We don't "think things on the net". Try to reword that part first.
 

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Students who are addicted to the Internet cannot help thinking about Internet-based activities at other times as well. The more time they spend using the Internet, the more uneasy they will feel when they have no Internet access.
 
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