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    Ashiuhto is offline Senior Member
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    pie chart

    Please help me correct the following sentences.

    1. According to the pie chart, we can find that only one-fourth of us can get enough sleep.
    2. Most people have trouble sleeping.
    3. It seems that how to sleep well has become a big problem in our life.

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    Re: pie chart

    Quote Originally Posted by Ashiuhto View Post
    Please help me correct the following sentences.

    1. According to the pie chart, we can find that only one-fourthone in four of us can gets enough sleep.
    2. Most people have trouble sleeping.
    3. It seems that how to sleepnot sleeping well has become a big problem in our lives.
    - the problem is not sleeping well; the challenge​ is how to sleep well. You could re-phrase paragraph 3 to reflect that, if you wish.
    I'm not a teacher of English, but I have spoken it for (almost) all of my life....

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