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    For years, he had suffered

    Please, would you correct these sentences. I am not sure if I have punctuated them correctly.

    1. For years, he had suffered from a severe illness, which prevented him from leading a normal life.
    2.The assailant shot the man in the legs, which prevented him from escaping.
    3. She could never forget her friend who took his own life when they were abroad.

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    Re: For years, he had suffered

    Please try to do it in separate threads.

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    Re: For years, he had suffered

    Please, could a teacher look at my sentences and tell me if they are grammatically correct.

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    Re: For years, he had suffered

    Quote Originally Posted by Bassim View Post
    Please, would you correct these sentences. I am not sure if I have punctuated them correctly.

    1. For years, he had suffered from a severe illness, which prevented him from leading a normal life. Delete the first comma.
    2.The assailant shot the man in the legs, which prevented him from escaping. OK.
    3. She could never forget her friend who took his own life when they were abroad.Substitute "had taken" for "took".
    Bhai.

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