syonati
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Hi! I'm writing an esay and I have few questions about the sentences i wrote. please see the paragraph attached:
It can be noticed that the revenues growth trend continues in 2012, the Group's revenues increased in 2012. The growth is mainly derived from the full annual contribution of 2-3 "Y" project stages and revenue growth from the property in Ohio which reflects full year revenue contribution to Group's revenues compared to solely five months contribution during year 2011. There was a revenue decrease in the Group properties in Florida as a result of properties improvement programs which caused to key renters evacuation as detailed above and engagement termination with "Limited" Group in January 2012, respectively (the total decrease in revenues refer to renters as mentioned above, is estimated at 64 thousands ILS a month)."
1) Can I say "the revenues growth trend continues in 2012"?
2) Can I say "compared to solely five months contribution "?
3) Is it right to say "engagement termination with "Limited" Group "?
4) If I want to say "Analysis of the changes" can I write " Changes' Analysis " ?
Thank you very much!
It can be noticed that the revenues growth trend continues in 2012, the Group's revenues increased in 2012. The growth is mainly derived from the full annual contribution of 2-3 "Y" project stages and revenue growth from the property in Ohio which reflects full year revenue contribution to Group's revenues compared to solely five months contribution during year 2011. There was a revenue decrease in the Group properties in Florida as a result of properties improvement programs which caused to key renters evacuation as detailed above and engagement termination with "Limited" Group in January 2012, respectively (the total decrease in revenues refer to renters as mentioned above, is estimated at 64 thousands ILS a month)."
1) Can I say "the revenues growth trend continues in 2012"?
2) Can I say "compared to solely five months contribution "?
3) Is it right to say "engagement termination with "Limited" Group "?
4) If I want to say "Analysis of the changes" can I write " Changes' Analysis " ?
Thank you very much!
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