The line joining the perigee and apogee vs The line joins the perigee and apogee

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anhnha

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Line of apsides. The line joining the perigee and apogee through the center of the earth.
Can I rewrite the above sentence as follows?
Line of apsides. The line joins the perigee and apogee through the center of the earth.
 

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The line "that joins," not just "joins."
 
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