Interested in Language
I want to take you to the moon to dance while admiring the beautiful view of earth. (Can I use to dance?)
I am trying to write a love letter, I am not sure if I am saying it correctly. Please, I need help.
not a teacher
Your sentence is OK grammatically but it's a little awkward.
Perhaps: "I want to dance with you on the moon as we enjoy the beautiful view of earth."