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    Cool That would get you overwhelmed' Sentence sounds natural.

    Hello everyone,

    *The interiors are luxurious and reflects masterful job that would get you overwhelmed if you saw them.

    I should leave out them or not?

    *I recommend to honeymooners, having a romantic atmosphere.(Because it has a romantic atmosphere)

    *Menu Favourite list. sth. wrong with it?
    Last edited by saloom2; 28-Feb-2013 at 18:08.
    I wish I had better English, but I work hard to improve it. I'm studying for IGCSE, so I'm only interested in BrE.

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    Gillnetter is offline Key Member
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    Re: That would get you overwhelmed' Sentence sounds natural.

    Quote Originally Posted by saloom2 View Post
    Hello everyone,

    *The interiors were luxurious and reflects masterful job that would get you overwhelmed if you saw them.
    "them" is not the problem with this sentence. You have a couple of tenses in this sentence, past and present. Are the interiors still luxurious? Try to rewrite this sentence in one tense.

    I should leave out them or not?

    *I don't recommend to honeymooners, having a romantic atmosphere.(Because it has a romantic atmosphere) I don't know what this means.

    *Menu Favourite list. sth. wrong with it? (?)
    Gil

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