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    Bassim is offline VIP Member
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    "What are your reasons..."

    Dear teachers,
    This sentence is from my own short story. Please would you take a look at it and tell me if I have punctuated it correctly.

    1. "What are your reasons for applying for asylum?" asked me a middle-aged interviewer, who, judging by his paunch and red bloated face, enjoyed good food and drink.

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    Gillnetter is offline Key Member
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    Re: "What are your reasons..."

    Quote Originally Posted by Bassim View Post
    Dear teachers,
    This sentence is from my own short story. Please would you take a look at it and tell me if I have punctuated it correctly.

    1. "What are your reasons for applying for asylum?" asked me a middle-aged interviewer (asked me) , who, judging by his paunch and red bloated face, enjoyed good food and drink.
    Gil

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