GilPlease, would you take a look at these two sentences and correct them.
1. "Do you have a pound or two?" asked her a beggar who was haggard and smelled badly. (You've got part of this backwards. It's not "asked her a beggar", it's, "a beggar asked her".
2. "Do you have a pound or two?" a beggar asked her,who, judging by his clothes
didhad not washed for months.
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