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    Ashiuhto is offline Senior Member
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    find out a good way

    Are the following sentences acceptable?

    1. She has a slim chance of breaking this record.
    2. The chance to break this record is slim for her.

    3. I will come up with a good idea to tidy up the place anyway.
    4. I will find out a good way to tidy up the place anyway.

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    Re: “Find a good way”

    I would rewrite all but the first sentence as follows.

    2. The chances of her breaking this record are slim.

    3. I will come up with a good idea for tidying (up) this place.

    4. I will find a good way to tidy (up) this place.
    Last edited by Nehushtan; 25-Mar-2013 at 13:06.
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    Re: find out a good way

    Quote Originally Posted by Ashiuhto View Post
    Are the following sentences acceptable?

    1. She has a slim chance of breaking this record.
    2. The chance to break this record is slim for her.
    The chances of her breaking this record are slim.

    3. I will come up with a good idea to tidy up the place anyway.
    4. I will find out a good way to tidy up the place anyway.
    I'll come up with a good idea for tidying this place up anyway.
    Above, in red, I have shown how I would word both.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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