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    Does this sound English?

    Dear teachers,
    Does this work? Especially the second part of the sentence "identify vulnerabilities in scripts and hacking attempts" - here I mean that we'll identify "vulnerabilities in scripts" and identify "hacking attempts".

    "We will scan your server for intrusions and rootkits, and identify vulnerabilities in scripts and hacking attempts recorded in the web server register".

    Thank you.

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    Re: Does this sound English?

    Quote Originally Posted by Solver View Post
    Dear teachers,
    Does this work? Especially the second part of the sentence "identify vulnerabilities in scripts and hacking attempts" - here I mean that we'll identify "vulnerabilities in scripts" and identify "hacking attempts".

    "We will scan your server for intrusions and rootkits, and identify vulnerabilities in scripts and hacking attempts recorded in the web server register".

    Thank you.
    It's OK, not ambiguous.

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