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    yjso21 is offline Newbie
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    Check my short writing please.:)

    His grandmother and parents scolded him when he did something dangerous, because they were worried about him.


    Should I use comma or not?

    Should I seperated this sentence into two parts?

    Please help me!!

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    Re: Check my short writing please.:)

    Quote Originally Posted by yjso21 View Post
    His grandmother and parents scolded him when he did something dangerous, because they were worried about him.
    The comma is fine, but not essential.
    Last edited by bhaisahab; 31-Mar-2013 at 20:28.

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