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    hella is offline Newbie
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    I have a grammar issue

    Is it correct to write, 'My writing is still immature, but I would appreciate it very much if the admissions office takes a look at it?'
    It would be really great if someone could help me as fast as possible.

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    Re: I have a grammar issue

    "Immature" is not generally a word I associate with writing. I would perhaps say "My writing still needs some improvement but I would appreciate it if the admissions office would consider it".
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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