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    Red face Word order problem!

    Which one sounds better?


    He would have become the prisoner of both wealth and theft.


    He would have become the prisoner both of wealth and of theft.

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    Re: Word order problem!

    Quote Originally Posted by Mad-ox View Post
    Which one sounds better?


    He would have become the prisoner of both wealth and theft.


    He would have become the prisoner both of wealth and of theft.
    I prefer the word order in the first. However, it's a rather odd sentence.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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