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    Bassim is offline VIP Member
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    Everybody has

    Please would you take a look at these two sentences and correct my mistakes.

    1. Everybody has a dream which does not leave them in peace.
    2. Everybody has a pain which follows them faithfully.

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    Bassim is offline VIP Member
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    Re: Everybody has

    I am wondering if someone would correct my mistakes, or tell me if these two sentences are all right.

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    Re: Everybody has

    There are no grammatical mistakes.

    I don't get how a pain can follow you faithfully. A dog will do that.

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    Re: Everybody has

    Rover_KE

    Thank you for your answer. This was more symbolically. I wanted to say that people can move to other countries, but still they will carry a pain with them, which will never leave them alone.

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