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Both Huang Chun-ming and Lee Chia-tung are prominent persons who have positive influences on the society. They are the symbolism of social conscience and worry about the deterioration of society. Out of their concern for society, they often comment on current events or criticize social maladies. Huang Chun-ming and Lee Chia-tung's concern is typical of many people. Living a privileged and pampered life, in a competitive environment governed by exams, isn't the next generation likely to be apathetic?