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    Ashiuhto is offline Senior Member
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    decision-making

    Please help me correct the following sentence. Thanks!

    When the privileged students who take their advantages for granted grow up, holding the social decision-making power some day in the future, their decision-making and thinking will also get rid of the real world that they don’t understand.
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    Re: decision-making

    Hi Ashiuhto

    It would help both us and anyone else reading your text if you could break it down into a series of shorter sentences.

    Best regards
    R21

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