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  1. #1
    sahanav is offline Junior Member
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    Right or Rephrase? How?

    We are pleased to receive your valuable input regarding your company’s logistical requirements; concerning Russian Trade.

  2. #2
    Getemjan is offline Newbie
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    Re: Right or Rephrase? How?

    Drop the semicolon. Also, within this limited context, I don't see any reason to capitalize the word trade.

    The grammar is otherwise correct, but the word choice seems unnecessarily formal to me.

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