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    #1

    Right or Rephrase? How?

    We are pleased to receive your valuable input regarding your company’s logistical requirements; concerning Russian Trade.

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    #2

    Re: Right or Rephrase? How?

    Drop the semicolon. Also, within this limited context, I don't see any reason to capitalize the word trade.

    The grammar is otherwise correct, but the word choice seems unnecessarily formal to me.

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