Student or Learner
Please, would you take a look at these two sentences and correct my mistakes:
1. The man was talking to his fellow workers, who listened to him as if he were a Messiah.
2. They were captivated by his voice which was rising and falling, and was full of emotions.
(Not a Teacher)
Your first sentence is fine. I'd get rid of the comma in the second sentence and make "emotions" singular.