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  1. azkad's Avatar
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    #1

    Question please check the opening part

    Does it sound natural in English?
    Please correct if necessary.

    Good morning, dear fathers, leaders of our peaceful life, and dear mothers, the most courteous to people!

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    #2

    Re: please check the opening part

    Unfortunately, everything after "Good morning" sounds unnatural to me, as an NES (BrE) but not a teacher.

    Regards
    R21

    PS "Good morning, ladies and gentlemen" would be more natural.

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