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    Ashiuhto is offline Senior Member
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    event / incident

    Are the following sentences acceptable?

    Here are some events/incidents which challenge us to contemplate what kind of generation we are seeking to develop through education after all. These events are as following written.

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    Re: event / incident

    No.

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    Ashiuhto is offline Senior Member
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    Re: event / incident

    I wrote the sentences as written.

    Here are some stories which challenge us to contemplate on our social development. They are as written.

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    Re: event / incident

    Quote Originally Posted by Ashiuhto View Post
    I wrote the sentences as written.

    Here are some stories which challenge us to contemplate on our social development. They are as written.
    It's better.

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