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    That means that he adds ......., if a teen looks down ...

    1. That means that he adds 9 to 13 kilograms of pressure to his neck if a teen looks down as he texts.

    2. That means if a teen looks down as he texts, he adds 9 to 13 kilograms of pressure to his neck.


    Are the both sentences grammatical?

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    Re: That means that he adds ......., if a teen looks down ...

    The second is much better. I'd put 'that' after 'means'.

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