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After relating these events above, I had some thoughts on them. During my working at teaching, I have thus been contemplating：what kind of next generation are we seeking to develop through education? The true aim of education should be to make a person sympathetic and considerate towards others. According, what inspirational words I’d like to offer you are：see the truth about the world and learn to wear other’s shoes.
Last edited by Ashiuhto; 17-Apr-2013 at 08:54.