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I should correctly paraphrase this introduction paragraph, I'm grateful for anyone willing to help me correcting my sentence.
Original sentence: The charts below show the numbers of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia's share of the Japanese tourist market
my sentence: The graphs compare average figures for Japanese tourists that visited a foreign country to the Australian quota of Japanese tourism from 1985 to 1995.
Thanks in advance, any suggestion is welcomed!
These graphs illustrate the average numbers of Japanese tourists that travelled overseas and Australia's popularity as a tourist destination for them in the decade 1985-1995.