[Essay] similar worries

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Ashiuhto

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Please help me correct the following paragraph. Thanks!

“These kids might be very intelligent and their grades are very good at school, but they lack sense of sympathy,” Eu Sen-peng also had similar worries. Prof. Eu, a professor of Department of Applied Mathematics at University of Kaohsiung, had taught in Mathematical gifted class at Jianguo Senior High School. He commented that most of the gifted students are considerate, thoughtful and docile.
 

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Please help me correct the following paragraph. Thanks!

“These kids might be very intelligent and their grades are very good at school, but they lack a sense of sympathy,” Eu Sen-peng also had similar worries. Prof. Eu, a professor in the of Department of Applied Mathematics at the University of Kaohsiung, had taught[STRIKE] in [/STRIKE] a Mathematics gifted class at Jianguo Senior High School. He commented that most of the gifted students are considerate, thoughtful and docile.

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