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    Smile How can I start an essay about a Charity work I did last week.

    Hello everyone,

    I would like to know how can I start and end an essay about a charity work I did last week. I don't know what to write even though I know all the details about that activity, Selling books.

    But the problem is about the starting end ending.
    I wish I had better English, but I work hard to improve it. I'm studying for IGCSE, so I'm only interested in BrE.

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    Re: How can I start an essay about a Charity work I did last week.

    Quote Originally Posted by saloom2 View Post
    Hello everyone,

    I would like to know how can I start and end an essay about a some charity work I did last week. I don't know what to write even though I know all the details about that activity, selling books.

    But the problem is about the starting end and ending.
    Try this -
    Last week I sold books for XYZ charity
    1. XYZ helps people by...
    2. Selling books is both a fun and learning experience (add examples)
    3. Charities such as XYZ need help (add specific examples of how they need help)
    4. People can help each other by doing what I did

    Summation - I helped this charity by selling books, you can do the same.

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    Re: How can I start an essay about a Charity work I did last week.

    I was about to say that we don't help with homework, saloom, as it would be unprofessional of us. Your teacher wants to know what you can do, not what we can do.

    Consider yourself lucky this time.

    Rover

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    Re: How can I start an essay about a Charity work I did last week.

    This essay is not a part of my H.W. Don't worry Rover. I don't ask about questions for my HW, only about things I can't tackle on my own.
    I wish I had better English, but I work hard to improve it. I'm studying for IGCSE, so I'm only interested in BrE.

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