Student or Learner
Please, would you take a look at these sentences and correct my mistakes:
1. The daughter was so angry with her parents that she disowned her family name.
2. Taking into account the old man's poor health he was in excellent mood.
2. I would change "Taking into account" to "Considering", add a comma after "health" and add "an" between "in" and "excellent".
Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.