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    nahednazzal is offline Newbie
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    dear all,

    dear all,

    kindly note my following comments on red

    1- a financal propsal has been requested through ammal as we deal.
    2- amal will contacted the high tech company asking about our stocks, to be changed to emv crads .

    3-we ask for unioning the vendor and to be under futhure company umberlla as we note from emp.

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    emsr2d2 is offline Moderator
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    Re: dear all,

    I will say the same thing I said in reply to your first post.

    In written English, we have rules about capitalisation and punctuation.

    - Start every sentence with a capital letter.
    - End every sentence with a single punctuation mark.
    - Start every proper noun (like "Amal") with a capital letter.
    - Acronyms are usually capitalised - E.M.V.

    "Crads" is not a word. "Emp" is not a word. "Financal" is not a word. "Propsal" is not a word. "Unioning" is not a word. "Futhure" is not a word. "Umberlla" is not a word.

    You have not written any words in red, so your first full sentence makes no sense.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    mayita1usa is offline Member
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    Re: dear all,

    Also, in the subject line of your posts, you must put the topic of your question, not "dear all".
    Thanks.

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