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    A night view of the mosque built in Dadyal namely XXX.

    Hi teachers,

    A night view of the mosque built in Dadyal namely XXX. Please correct it.


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    Re: A night view of the mosque built in Dadyal namely XXX.

    Presumably if the mosque was built in Dadyal, then it is still in Dadyal. There is no need to say "built in".

    A night view of XXXXX, the mosque in Dadyal.

    Please note that this is not a full sentence and will only work if it is a caption underneath a photograph or painting of the mosque. If it's not, then you need to start it with "This is" or "I really like the (not a)" or "I have asked a photographer to take ..." or something else which makes it a full sentence.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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