Ashiuhto
Senior Member
- Joined
- Nov 30, 2010
- Member Type
- English Teacher
- Native Language
- Chinese
- Home Country
- Taiwan
- Current Location
- Taiwan
Please help me correct the following paragraph. Thanks!
My favorite subject is science because everything around us involves science. By learning science, I learn to think independently and conduct research, I learn all about the world that we live in, and science helps me to become better informed. For example, if we learn science, we won't fall for all those scams, cons, hoaxes, and quack medicines! Therefore, the study of science is essential. Science is fun and exciting. I’m thinking of becoming a scientist in the future. I want to uncover the mysteries of nature, perform experiments or carry out calculations to learn how the world works.
My favorite subject is science because everything around us involves science. By learning science, I learn to think independently and conduct research, I learn all about the world that we live in, and science helps me to become better informed. For example, if we learn science, we won't fall for all those scams, cons, hoaxes, and quack medicines! Therefore, the study of science is essential. Science is fun and exciting. I’m thinking of becoming a scientist in the future. I want to uncover the mysteries of nature, perform experiments or carry out calculations to learn how the world works.