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    #1

    Can somebody review my story?

    I don't know if this is possible on this forum. I have written this story for a 2page story contest at school and scheduled a meeting with my professor to check it grammatically, but unfortunately she wasn't there.
    Would somebody here care to read my story and tell me about any grammatical mistakes or issues with the story. The deadline is tomorrow and I am still asking around for an English professor but if one of you guys could help that'd be great. I could send the story privately.

    I'm sorry if it's against the rules.


    +I am not looking for someone to help me as in I'm going to fool those judges, I just need a second opinion and someone to point out any grammatical issues to submit it as neatly and perfectly as possible. The story is already finished.


    Thanks

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    #2

    Re: Can somebody review my story?

    If it's for a contest, it would not be right for us to assist.

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    #3

    Re: Can somebody review my story?

    Quote Originally Posted by 5jj View Post
    If it's for a contest, it would not be right for us to assist.
    But it is all done, I wrote it all on my own. I just want to make sure there isn't any minor mistakes with the grammar. Is it out of the question?

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    Re: Can somebody review my story?

    I'm afraid so. If mistakes in grammar are not penalised, then you don't need our help. If they are penalised, then it would be unfair for us to help anybody.
    Last edited by 5jj; 29-Apr-2013 at 19:16. Reason: typo

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