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    What is the another important

    If any of my correction is wrong, please let me know. The questions were made by some Korean English teacher based on the following paragraph.
    1. Exemplify what good food for your bodies according to this article.
    => Exemplify what are good foods for your bodies according to this article.
    or Exemplify good foods for your bodies according to this article.
    2. What is the another important key to be a smart eater?
    =>What is another important key to be a smart eater?
    3.Do you have to give upon junk food altogether?
    =>Do you have to give up on junk food altogether?
    4. How can you consider junk food in the end?
    =>What do you think of junk food in the end?

    ...For many teens, three meals a day aren't enough. Snacks are an essential part of their diet because they supply the energy teens need between meals.While it's easy to reach for chips, instant noodles, and other junk food, start getting into the habit of eating healthy snacks.
    This will not only keep your energy level high, but it will also help you fill up on nutrients rather than sugar, fat, and empty calories.
    ...

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    Re: What is the another important

    Quote Originally Posted by keannu View Post
    If any of my correction is wrong, please let me know. The questions were made by some Korean English teacher based on the following paragraph.
    1. Exemplify what good food for your bodies according to this article.
    => Exemplify what are good foods for your bodies according to this article.
    or Exemplify good foods for your bodies according to this article.
    These seem very awkward to me. I'd prefer 'According to this article, what is/are good food/foods for your body'.


    2. What is the another important key to be a smart eater? Incorrect
    =>What is another important key to be a smart eater? Correct

    3.Do you have to give upon junk food altogether? Incorrect
    =>Do you have to give up on junk food altogether? Correct

    4. How can you consider junk food in the end? Again seems awkward. (I would consider this incorrect)
    =>What do you think of junk food in the end? More natural, but there is a better way for it to be said.

    ...For many teens, three meals a day aren't enough. Snacks are an essential part of their diet because they supply the energy teens need between meals.While it's easy to reach for chips, instant noodles, and other junk food, start getting into the habit of eating healthy snacks.
    This will not only keep your energy level high, but it will also help you fill up on nutrients rather than sugar, fat, and empty calories.
    ...
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    Last edited by emsr2d2; 01-May-2013 at 07:46. Reason: Typo
    I'm not a teacher yet, but I am studying a Bachelor of Education with an English Literature major at Charles Sturt University, in NSW, Australia.

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