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I need help revising thesis statements. We are given 2 of them and are told that they are two narrow, to broad, or to vague and need to be revised.
These statements are: Advertisers of food products use color-enhanced images to entice consumers into purchasing their products. The other statement is: The media are resposible for causing eating disorders and encouraging unrealstic ideals of beauty.
Please help in major need of understanding