Raymond Yeesalneeks
New member
- Joined
- May 13, 2013
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Latvian, Lettish
- Home Country
- Latvia
- Current Location
- Latvia
I'm really sorry for my awful english, but I need your help to correct my mistakes and maybe edit my sentences or express my idea in different words.
Dear Sir or Madam:
With this letter, I would like to express my interest in studying at the „University of ...”
My name is Raimonds. I was born in Latvia, the country next to The Baltic Sea. Latvia is really wonderful little country with a bit more than 2.5 millions of citizens and it is fantastic that from 2004 Latvia in the European Union.
I am comprehensively developed person. In soonest few weeks I am going to finish studies in Riga Secondary School Nr.93. I constantly trying to participate in different variety of activities just because I like to work in team or group and spend my free time doing some interesting activities that I am involved in. I usually go on the most various optional classes outside of school, doing some sports and in general I am trying to lead an active lifestyle. I regularly go to the gym to keep myself in good shape and so my immune system is not weakened. At age 12, graduated from the computer courses at 17 graduated waiters – bartender courses so I can find some summer job and part time job while I still study. I love people. I enjoy communicate with them, make different discussions about any topic and help with all I can.
This may sound strange, but wherever I go I always find some new interesting friends and I am very pleased about that. Just because I like to study and communicate with people with different culture, try to learn something more about other religions and nationalities, that’s why I regularly travel a lot with my parents and I have been already to more than ten different countries which we visited by car and most of time we stayed in tent in wild.
From the life I want to get as many as I can and I want to be useful to people and my main goal in life is to get a higher education and competitive profession, so I can work in the chosen profession and regularly improve it as far as possible. I think this university “Name of University” has everything that I want and all what I need. I want to apply “Communication and Multimedia” very interesting with great potential for career advancement and further education. As I mentioned before I like to work and communicate with people, work with computers and with different audio and video stuffs. I have read a lot of your educational institution and if I can say, I fell in love with it. I love that students can communicate with teachers freely like with friends, little classes is big plus too, because than teacher can concentrate on every student. It’s so lovely how much useful practical knowledge your high school can give, how great it is to meet people from different countries and make them as your friends.
Thank you for considering my request. I look forward to your positive response.
Yours faithfully,
Dear Sir or Madam:
With this letter, I would like to express my interest in studying at the „University of ...”
My name is Raimonds. I was born in Latvia, the country next to The Baltic Sea. Latvia is really wonderful little country with a bit more than 2.5 millions of citizens and it is fantastic that from 2004 Latvia in the European Union.
I am comprehensively developed person. In soonest few weeks I am going to finish studies in Riga Secondary School Nr.93. I constantly trying to participate in different variety of activities just because I like to work in team or group and spend my free time doing some interesting activities that I am involved in. I usually go on the most various optional classes outside of school, doing some sports and in general I am trying to lead an active lifestyle. I regularly go to the gym to keep myself in good shape and so my immune system is not weakened. At age 12, graduated from the computer courses at 17 graduated waiters – bartender courses so I can find some summer job and part time job while I still study. I love people. I enjoy communicate with them, make different discussions about any topic and help with all I can.
This may sound strange, but wherever I go I always find some new interesting friends and I am very pleased about that. Just because I like to study and communicate with people with different culture, try to learn something more about other religions and nationalities, that’s why I regularly travel a lot with my parents and I have been already to more than ten different countries which we visited by car and most of time we stayed in tent in wild.
From the life I want to get as many as I can and I want to be useful to people and my main goal in life is to get a higher education and competitive profession, so I can work in the chosen profession and regularly improve it as far as possible. I think this university “Name of University” has everything that I want and all what I need. I want to apply “Communication and Multimedia” very interesting with great potential for career advancement and further education. As I mentioned before I like to work and communicate with people, work with computers and with different audio and video stuffs. I have read a lot of your educational institution and if I can say, I fell in love with it. I love that students can communicate with teachers freely like with friends, little classes is big plus too, because than teacher can concentrate on every student. It’s so lovely how much useful practical knowledge your high school can give, how great it is to meet people from different countries and make them as your friends.
Thank you for considering my request. I look forward to your positive response.
Yours faithfully,