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    Hello,teachers,Are these sentences correct?

    Hello,teachers,Are these sentences correct?

    Sky began to clear, the breeze across, so gentle, like every time you steal kiss my cheek, I laughed, simply because the thought of you.

    Thanks!

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    Re: Hello,teachers,Are these sentences correct?

    Quote Originally Posted by Harry12345 View Post
    Hello,teachers,Are these sentences correct?

    Sky began to clear, the breeze across, so gentle, like every time you steal kiss my cheek, I laughed, simply because the thought of you.

    Thanks!
    Not a teacher

    While we are waiting for our teachers to come and answer. I would like to give you my try:

    Sky began to clear, the breeze was as gentle as your furtive kiss on my cheek. I smiled thinking of you.

    Of course, I need someone to correct it. :)
    Last edited by crazYgeeK; 19-May-2013 at 06:04.

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    Re: Hello,teachers,Are these sentences correct?

    Thanks。 Where are the teachers? Please help us

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    Re: Hello,teachers,Are these sentences correct?

    Quote Originally Posted by Harry12345 View Post
    Hello teachers. Are these sentences correct?

    The sky began to clear, the breeze blew/wafted across, so gentle, like every time you steal a kiss on my cheek. I laughed, simply because at the thought of you.

    Thanks!
    Please see the changes I made to your sentences in red. Please also note that we do not put a space before a question mark or an exclamation mark.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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