Hello，teachers，Are these sentences correct？

[Harry12345]

Hello，teachers，Are these sentences correct？

Sky began to clear, the breeze across, so gentle, like every time you steal kiss my cheek, I laughed, simply because the thought of you.

Thanks！

 

[crazYgeeK]

Hello，teachers，Are these sentences correct？

Sky began to clear, the breeze across, so gentle, like every time you steal kiss my cheek, I laughed, simply because the thought of you.

Thanks！

Not a teacher

While we are waiting for our teachers to come and answer. I would like to give you my try:

Sky began to clear, the breeze was as gentle as your furtive kiss on my cheek. I smiled thinking of you.

Of course, I need someone to correct it.

 

[Harry12345]

Thanks。 Where are the teachers？ Please help us

 

[emsr2d2]

Hello teachers. Are these sentences correct?

The sky began to clear, the breeze blew/wafted across, so gentle, like every time you steal a kiss on my cheek. I laughed, simply [strike]because[/strike] at the thought of you.

Thanks!

Please see the changes I made to your sentences in red. Please also note that we do not put a space before a question mark or an exclamation mark.