without any success

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thomas615

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Teacher, are these sentences OK?

You have asked us to send you darker copies of the our records. We tried to get our photocopier to make darker copies of our records but without any success. We are sorry we are not able to provide you with darker copies.
 

MikeNewYork

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It is fine except for: You have asked us to send you darker copies of the our records. Lose "the".
 
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