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  1. Newbie
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      • Native Language:
      • English
      • Home Country:
      • Nigeria
      • Current Location:
      • Nigeria

    • Join Date: May 2013
    • Posts: 1

    Lightbulb REQUEST

    The Bursar, Afe Babalola University,ABUAB,Ado-Ekiti.Dear Sir,A Request For Better ServiceI am the Managing Partner of the above named Sanitary Consultancy Outfit- retained to render the services of Fumigation/Pest Control on your students hostel buildings.I deem it necessary this particular time to implore you Sir., to inform your students (which have private locks) while still on session now before vacation, to drop a key duplicate of their room locks at the Portal before leaving for homes; to make it accessible for our Operators when carrying out fumigation and sanitary exercise on the buildings two weeks before resumption .This will definetly aid the effectiveness of our job for a better result. And also, we request a copy of your University academic calender for proper schedules of our job.Meanwhile, I would be glad to honour an invitation for a meeting from you if there is any observation on possible ways to serve you better.This request is based on our keen interest to serve you better as assured.ThanksYours sincerely, Aderemi Oluwaseyi CharlesSenior/Managing Partner

  2. emsr2d2's Avatar
    English Teacher
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      • British English
      • Home Country:
      • UK
      • Current Location:
      • UK

    • Join Date: Jul 2009
    • Posts: 51,580


    Welcome to the forum.

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