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    Lightbulb Please make my sentence sound better or professional

    hi, can you please help me do this sound better and more professional please thanks


    1) Will be removed a 10sq of old flat roof.

    2) Approximately a 4sq of tile will bee removed.

    3) You will then be placed 4sq of tile of 20 yrs and put the 2 channels that were removed and arranged all the pieces that are removed from the tile.

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    Re: Please make my sentence sound better or professional

    Welcome to the forums, Marlene.

    What is the context and background to your asking about these sentences or sentence fragments, which have many problems?

    Rover

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    Re: Please make my sentence sound better or professional

    Concentrate on what you are writing. In #2, you have written "bee" instead of "be". I'm sure you know it's wrong but you clearly didn't read your post before submitting it.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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