[Grammar] Please make my sentence sound better or professional

[Marlene Reyes]

hi, can you please help me do this sound better and more professional please thanks


1) Will be removed a 10sq of old flat roof.

2) Approximately a 4sq of tile will bee removed.

3) You will then be placed 4sq of tile of 20 yrs and put the 2 channels that were removed and arranged all the pieces that are removed from the tile.

 

[Rover_KE]

Welcome to the forums, Marlene.:-D

What is the context and background to your asking about these sentences or sentence fragments, which have many problems?

Rover

 

[emsr2d2]

Concentrate on what you are writing. In #2, you have written "bee" instead of "be". I'm sure you know it's wrong but you clearly didn't read your post before submitting it.