[Grammar] is there any mistakes in this?

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NANDANABALAK

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Mind can overpower your heart. Even if your heart wishes to do something or has feelings for someone or something, your mind wishes otherwise. If you look closely into the interaction between your thoughts, emotions, conscience and beliefs, it can be seen very clearly that your decisions are mostly influenced by people that matters to you. Some decisions are taken just because you want to be in someone’s good book, some because you don’t want to hurt someone. And certain major ones are so because the society demands so. At times you may wonder where is the personal freedom?. But how long can you keep the feelings, emotions and your wishes buried deep inside your heart. How long can you fool yourself and make yourself believe that everything happens for a reason? Whenever you are alone or get some time to contemplate on your life, things that you have in your heart creeps into your mind and you will find yourself engulfed in a sea of grief.
 
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For a start, your title should read "Are ​there any mistakes in this?"
 

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