Student or Learner
I am writting an application and want to confirm that structure and grammar of these sentences are correct.
I have to write an exam for my Diploma program on June 18, 2013. Therefore, I would like to take a half day off from lunch break to rest of the day.
Kindly grand me a half day leave.
Can we assume that lines 1, 2 and 5 are to us, and that lines 3 and 4 are the text in question? Or is line 3 part of the explanation to us, and line 5 part of your application? There is a very easy solution to this all too frequent problem.
PS: Could everyone take note of this, please.