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    Is the punctuation right in this sentence?

    I am a fashion designer, but I work like a sculptor; building every garment
    piece by piece.

    Thanks for your help.

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    Re: Is the punctuation right in this sentence?

    The semicolon is incorrect. Use another comma (or a dash) instead.

    A better title would have been 'I am a fashion designer'.

    Extract from the Posting Guidelines:

    'Thread titles should include all or part of the word/phrase being discussed.'

    Rover

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    Re: Is the punctuation right in this sentence?

    Dear Rover,

    Thanks for the help. Will keep the titile requirements in mind.
    Could you please tell me why the semi-colon is incorrect?

    Thanks in advance.

    Regards,

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    Re: Is the punctuation right in this sentence?

    A semicolon connects two related sentences. '...building every garment' is not a sentence.

    You could also use a colon there.

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