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hello..>>in one of my poems, I end L4 and have L5 as:"--becoming/the you you found in me." Please tell me if this is incorrect in any way and, if so, offer a more correct way to say it. Thank you..SpirosZ
Becoming the person/me you found in me seems more logical. Why would you become the other person that they found in you? You could become the person they saw in you,but that is more likely to better a better version of you.