Student or Learner
I wonder if two of my corrections are correct. In the second, both "would" and "would have been" seem to work.
2)When I learned his life(Charlie Dickens) story, it would be(=>felt) too hard to overcome. And I realized that my life is happier compared to his. In his novels, perhaps even a little bit of his life would(=>would have been) be implied. So every time I think of his life and read this book. In this story also the background was poor. Streets were narrow and dirty and building were old, dark and ugly.
I couldn't agree more with bhaisahab. With the exception of the sentence "And I realized that my life was happier compared to his" (and I don't particularly like that one!), every sentence is completely unnatural and/or has an error.
Where on earth did you find this, keannu?
Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.
It's a Korean's composition for a lecture of Charlse's novel. So you don't have to correct anything.
If you don't like this, would it be better to say "I realized that I live a happier life than his."?
And I realized that my life was happier compared to his