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    #1

    Statement of purpose

    Then I realized that everything in nature has its own place and functions and one filled with a plethora of remaining mysteries; may be thereís something we donít yet figure it out, like pieces to a puzzle, where the things to put in?


    Is this line OK? Please help...

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    Re: Statement of purpose

    I'm afraid not.

    You're trying too hard to sound academic. It is not grammatical and will impress nobody.

    Rover

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