Student or Learner
I am a bit unsure about the grammar of this sentence:
"I am proud to have made it to a point where attending an institution with an appeal such as that of XYZ Business School is a real possibility for me."
I am comparing the appeal of different institutes with the appeal of XYZ business school. I used "that of" instead of reusing the word appeal but the sentence sounds incorrect. Am I writing it incorrectly or it just sounds wrong to the ear?
sfyn2it, a better title would have been 'that of'.
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