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    Question Request for certifying my qualification

    I would like to seek comments for the below sentence structure and grammar for my reference. Thank You for helpful.


    Dear Sir/ Madam
    I work in engineering field about 20 years focusing on electrical system in China. In this period, I have attained the following academic qualification.

    Academic qualification (College / University; Awarded Year)
    Btec certificate (ABD College 1980)
    High certification (Technical College 1982)
    Bachelor (Hons) degree in Mechanical Engineering (XX University 1992)
    Master degree in Mechanical management & engineering (XX University 1996)

    The Chartered Institution of ABC is one of the mechanical engineering leadership and standard. Therefore, I would like to prepare engineering practice report and apply for the full member grade and Chartered Engineer. Please let me know whether my academic qualification and experience fulfill the ABC s standard route requirement.

    Regards
    Apple T

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    Re: Request for certifying my qualification

    Quote Originally Posted by ben9108 View Post
    I would like to seek comments for the below sentence structure and grammar for my reference. Thank You for helpful.


    Dear Sir/ Madam
    I work in engineering field about 20 years focusing on electrical system in China. In this period, I have attained the following academic qualification.

    Academic qualification (College / University; Awarded Year)
    Btec certificate (ABD College 1980)
    High certification (Technical College 1982)
    Bachelor (Hons) degree in Mechanical Engineering (XX University 1992)
    Master degree in Mechanical management & engineering (XX University 1996)

    The Chartered Institution of ABC is one of the mechanical engineering leadership and standard. Therefore, I would like to prepare engineering practice report and apply for the full member grade and Chartered Engineer. Please let me know whether my academic qualification and experience fulfill the ABC ‘s standard route requirement.

    Regards
    Apple T
    Look at your use of the present tense in the first sentence of your letter. Think about it. Are you sure that the simple present is the appropriate tense?
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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