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I Need Help With My Essay. Many Of My Classmates Said It Was Unorganized. Can you please give me some feedback and find some errors that you think i can fix since this paper is due tomorrow. Thanks.
Last edited by Student0308; 17-Jul-2013 at 04:02. Reason: people might steal my essay
We don't help with homework, 0308.
When your teacher has marked your essay and returned it, you can ask us about any of his/her corrections you don't understand.
Only the first word of each sentence in your post needs to be capitalised. Note also that 'I' is always capitalised — wherever it comes in the sentence.